During todays lesson the class got to see our main brief again. The edit we were showing would have been a improvement on the first one and should have made the improvements the other members of the class put forward.
Here is the feedback I got back.
As the feedback suggests I changed all of my sound from my first edit as it obviously didn't fit with my opening. From the feedback I got after watching the second edit, was that my music and sound effects went perfectly with the message I was trying to put across. Although I will have to change one sound effect which would be the swing sound effect as some people thought it sounded metal and the swing was clearly rope, so I will have to search for a rope swing sound effect.
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